Friday, 5 August 2011

A thousand whirling dervishes



50-word poem by Lisa Falzon
image source found on the CC on FLICKR, original here

4 comments:

Christa Calleja said...

Beautiful.

Fresh Garden said...

Nice! Keep it coming!

Unknown said...

Yes! Perfection. What a divine way to spin the essence of faith and devotion. Thank you. Worthy of Rumi. In fact, to my twenty-first century ear, better.
Perhaps rhyme can stage a comeback if poets like you unflinchingly stand to announce the small "s" sacred inside the de-complexified.

Expat said...

Absolutely beautiful!