Monday, 23 May 2011

Lightly Polluted



50-word story and photo by Lisa Falzon

16 comments:

HOLLY BURGESS said...

Baby the stars shine bright. Just beautiful. x

Lynn said...

Fabulous!

Dell Smith said...

Great stuff.

Trevor said...

I like how the words are pasted on an image. Cool.

Beans said...

I dig this post. :)

ortusanimus said...

Well go on darling, how do you expect us to carry on without you?
It's been over a month already.

Karishma Shetty said...

Very effective. I like your style!

Alex Fremton said...

Yeye, he ain't worf the door frame framing 'im, blocking zi stars and all. i'd high-tail back, did ya get a read on the moon phase?

page210 said...

Achingly powerful! You have such a fantastic way with words. I am always inspired to write on after reading one of your flashes.

Lisa Falzon said...

Thanks for all the feedback :) Page210, do you also write microfiction?

page210 said...

I do write some flash, but I go a little longer, usually between 150-500 words. If you stop by, I'd love some feedback!

Ruth said...

Great! Just perfect!

ArtSnark said...

Havent been around in ages. Happy to see that you are still sharing your brilliant corner of the world :)

Kenney Mencher said...

I like the Jenny Holzer/Barbara Kruger use of text. The pathos of the story is something I can also relate too and it went well with the image and the font.

Really strong piece!

Unbelievable said...

I absolutely love these, this one especially. Are they available for purchase? Printed on a canvas or something?

Lisa Falzon said...

Hey Unbelievable!

They will be available shortly as prints. Check out some samples here...

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10150515271626081&set=a.10150491262296081.419906.89562696080&type=3&theater