Tuesday, 14 February 2012

Another Sea

flash fiction



Here's another stubborn sea
whose pull can sweep my legs from under me -
Waves that steal me from the beach
to drop me where my toes can't reach.

But being  kinder, older, fairer, bolder,
this ocean spares her coldest shoulder.
And lets her current
take me
where you aren't.



One for Valentine's day, folks...

50-word-poem and art Lisa Falzon 2012
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8 comments:

  1. Tami Cohen15 February 2012 at 14:02

    awesome. love

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  2. The Veracious Wordsmith17 February 2012 at 19:49

    Once again ..... I love it .... :D :D ......

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  3. Unknown22 February 2012 at 05:11

    As much as I despise Singles Awareness Day in all its forms, I like the concept of your 50-word fictions. It must be a challenge.

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  4. Lisa Falzon22 February 2012 at 13:31

    Haha Samuel, most of my 50-word stories are love/hate poems of some kind, so I guess it's Single Awareness Day everyday as you put it ;)

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  5. Anonymous22 February 2012 at 19:26

    Beautiful graphics and beautiful poem!

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  6. CurseGod, the novel23 February 2012 at 21:56

    hmmmmm......impressive!

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  7. Not Required27 February 2012 at 11:07

    Really beautiful. Lovely to see a new story up.

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  8. Anonymous4 April 2012 at 19:18

    beautiful, Yes
    ^_^

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