Sunday 20 March 2011

Doppler Effect




Doppler Effect

Your trajectory displays habitual signs -
So dear, I've come to know your spectral lines.


I've learnt you move towards me when you're blue -
with voice so sweet it barely seems like you.


But then you quicken red and angry are
and shoot past me, so deeply-voiced, my star.










'Doppler Effect', 50-word flash poem written March 2011 by Lisa Falzon.
stock photo, own artwork.
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2 comments:

  1. Larissa Joy28 March 2011 at 06:16

    You craft your phrases so well. Really impressive. I love the way you play with language.

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  2. Logic Replacement30 March 2011 at 23:46

    Hi

    I love how these stories are presented and amazing all in 50 words!

    I also like the presentation at http://www.armyofpuppets.com where the stories are short but more than 50 words.

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