Sunday, 20 March 2011

Doppler Effect

Doppler Effect

Your trajectory displays habitual signs -
So dear, I've come to know your spectral lines.

I've learnt you move towards me when you're blue -
with voice so sweet it barely seems like you.

But then you quicken red and angry are
and shoot past me, so deeply-voiced, my star.

'Doppler Effect', 50-word flash poem written March 2011 by Lisa Falzon.
stock photo, own artwork.


  1. You craft your phrases so well. Really impressive. I love the way you play with language.

  2. Hi

    I love how these stories are presented and amazing all in 50 words!

    I also like the presentation at where the stories are short but more than 50 words.


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