Saturday, 18 December 2010

Bellyachin'

Everytime she complains of belly pains I find myself fantasising she's actually
pregnant with a little monster, sired by my desire.
At the hospital, aghast doctors could slice out this tiny bit of misshappen wriggling misery. A little wonder, this ugly freak. Brought to life by a pair of girls.


x 50-word story by Lisa Falzon
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 December 2010 at 22:51

    Just wanted to say how much I enjoy your short stories. The latest format (words on a background) is very effective.

    Hope you don't mind, I have linked to your blog from my own blog, using you as an example of great microfiction.

    http://ruthlivingstone.wordpress.com/microfiction/

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  2. Lisa Falzon20 December 2010 at 00:41

    Hey Ruth, thanks so much :)

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  3. Artsnark14 January 2011 at 11:37

    Thank you for sharing your wee tales. One of my favorite stops on the web.

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