you are super creepy. LOVE IT!
being hunted by a witch can do that to a girl...
It made more sense after I read the title. Maybe I should be doing that first?
Hehe yes it is always taken into consideration that one would start to read 'at the top' and read the title. :)
Greetings from South Africa.I love this one! Had to rake my brain a little to remember the original but I got there. Thanks for sharing your stories.Juzhttp://juztick.blogspot.com
does the title count as free words? ... it adds quite a bit to the story to know the girls name.
I have never counted the title words in my stories, but I title them all.Some people don't title their stories or pictures, but I always do. It is distinct from it.
Brilliant! I hope you've read John Connolly's Book of lost things? I think you'd like it alot :)
Love the creepy factor! What about from Hansel's perspective?
Wow, I just discovered your blog. I was searching for micro-fiction. I love your stories. This one is very creepy, I like it a lot.
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