I stroll for a while in copper-coloured landscapes. Faraway flora seems over-sharp to my eyes in light of their distance. Then I come across dozens of sepia-haired damsels. All bearing the face of Lizzie. How long have I been here, I wonder? Trapped in one of her laudanum dreams.
ethereally enchanting!
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ReplyDeleteMy first time here. And the first time I ran into micro-fiction. Like it. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteyour words evoke beautiful imagery...
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David
Hooray for micro-fiction.
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I'm waiting in great anticipation for your next entry. Juz
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ReplyDeletewow this is really cool! i've read a few of your other posts, and i find it fascinating that you can tell a whole story in just 50 words. well done!
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ReplyDeleteThis is supposed to be D. G. Rossetti dreaming of his wife Elizabeth Siddal, I take it? Nicely done.
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